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SamanthaSews 07-27-2012 08:51 AM

Check out my new & improved Etsy!
 
So I renamed my etsy store & started working on updating it.

So far I've written the about page and the co-owners bios. Tell me what you think! I know I'm not the best writer but I don't think it's half bad!

http://www.etsy.com/shop/CadensCove/about

I need to update the store policies, & add a new banner next!

SamanthaSews 07-30-2012 07:01 PM

Did anyone check out my about page? What did you think?

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Ericagreen2116 07-30-2012 07:18 PM

Nice bio mamma!
And your in RI? I was born and raised in westerly :0)

SamanthaSews 07-30-2012 07:21 PM

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Originally Posted by Ericagreen2116
Nice bio mamma!
And your in RI? I was born and raised in westerly :0)

Yes, thanks! Living in Riverside for now. :)

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MotherMoonPads 07-30-2012 11:37 PM

Re: Check out my new & improved Etsy!
 
This may seem really petty, but the punctuation and run on sentences in your about me page bothers me. :blush: I would give it a once over for that. :goodvibes:

I love the photo of you and your baby. :)

SamanthaSews 07-31-2012 06:07 AM

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Originally Posted by MotherMoonPads
This may seem really petty, but the punctuation and run on sentences in your about me page bothers me. :blush: I would give it a once over for that. :goodvibes:

I love the photo of you and your baby. :)

Yeah, I do agree with you on the run-ons. I was thinking that as I wrote it. I did write it on the fly, so I will sit down & write it out more thoughtfully. Thanks for checking it out.

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justjess 08-01-2012 07:59 PM

Love the name Caden! I have a cadyn(spelled different pronounced the same) so I'm a bit partial:) can't wait to see your woolies!

Mom2jandb 08-10-2012 06:34 PM

I liked it :)

SamanthaSews 08-10-2012 06:37 PM

Thanks! Hopefully in the next few weeks we will have some items to list. Today was my mom/business partner last day of work so she now can devote herself to the business full time :)

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The Green Avacado 08-12-2012 12:18 PM

Re: Check out my new & improved Etsy!
 
your about me section looks wonderful! :) can't wait to see the wool!


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