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Old 06-04-2012, 07:31 AM   #11
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Re: Need opionions on a letter to my employer.

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Originally Posted by megkmc View Post
The only change I suggest is to list the exact date your maternity leave will start. Saying mid-sept still may be vague. I wouldn't want there to be any weekend when you think your done and he thinks your still coming. Good luck!
This, and one other change you may want to consider making is taking out "she's so sweet most of the time" part (the 'most of the time' I mean). I don't know the relationship you have with them but it kinda rubbed me the wrong way. I know I'm being picky, sorry Otherwise I think the letter is absolutely perfect!
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