Check out my new & improved Etsy!

[SamanthaSews]

So I renamed my etsy store & started working on updating it.

So far I've written the about page and the co-owners bios. Tell me what you think! I know I'm not the best writer but I don't think it's half bad!

http://www.etsy.com/shop/CadensCove/about

I need to update the store policies, & add a new banner next!

[SamanthaSews]

Did anyone check out my about page? What did you think?

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[Ericagreen2116]

Nice bio mamma!
And your in RI? I was born and raised in westerly :0)

[SamanthaSews]

Originally Posted by Ericagreen2116 Nice bio mamma! And your in RI? I was born and raised in westerly :0)

Yes, thanks! Living in Riverside for now.

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[MotherMoonPads]

This may seem really petty, but the punctuation and run on sentences in your about me page bothers me. I would give it a once over for that.

I love the photo of you and your baby.

[SamanthaSews]

Originally Posted by MotherMoonPads This may seem really petty, but the punctuation and run on sentences in your about me page bothers me. I would give it a once over for that. I love the photo of you and your baby.

Yeah, I do agree with you on the run-ons. I was thinking that as I wrote it. I did write it on the fly, so I will sit down & write it out more thoughtfully. Thanks for checking it out.

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[justjess]

Love the name Caden! I have a cadyn(spelled different pronounced the same) so I'm a bit partial can't wait to see your woolies!

[Mom2jandb]

I liked it

[SamanthaSews]

Thanks! Hopefully in the next few weeks we will have some items to list. Today was my mom/business partner last day of work so she now can devote herself to the business full time

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[The Green Avacado]

your about me section looks wonderful! can't wait to see the wool!