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Old 05-18-2010, 09:17 AM   #11
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Old 05-18-2010, 09:28 AM   #12
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I love it! I wanna have another baby now, just so I can hire you!
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Old 05-18-2010, 09:54 AM   #13
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Looks great!

I don't know if this is possible, if you're quoting it you probably need to leave it alone...but.... in the "benefits" list, instead of saying "less likely to be dissatisfied..." it might be more positive and less confusing to say, "more likely to be (happy/sastified/pleased/whatever term you like) with the birth experience."

I had to read that line twice before it was clear - it kind of has adouble negative the way its worded right now - at least to my mind!
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Old 05-18-2010, 09:55 AM   #14
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Looks great!

I don't know if this is possible, if you're quoting it you probably need to leave it alone...but.... in the "benefits" list, instead of saying "less likely to be dissatisfied..." it might be more positive and less confusing to say, "more likely to be (happy/sastified/pleased/whatever term you like) with the birth experience."

I had to read that line twice before it was clear - it kind of has adouble negative the way its worded right now - at least to my mind!
Yes yes. I was trying to keep it positive but I've missed this one. If you see something else please let me know.
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Old 05-18-2010, 01:59 PM   #15
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I have played around a little more and added pretty birth quotes to the first page. I also moved the advantages to the "Services" page. Let me know what you think . I though it might be a little too much for the first page once I add PP doula and breastfeeding counselor.
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Old 05-20-2010, 11:31 AM   #16
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I love your story and the pics of your birth. I second the response above that if we were in the same location I'd want to chat more about hiring you!
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Wonderful site! It's looking really nice
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good idea and good website, i learn a lot from you site, thanks
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Old 06-01-2010, 09:43 AM   #19
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Thanks mamas I'm trying to optimize it for google searches but by brain doesn't like computer stuff..... It's smoking It's not showing up anywhere when you search for it....DH is trying to find someone to help me with it.
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I just want to say that it's wonderful that you offer free services to teen moms and military moms, what a great thing.
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